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[4 Swords Misadventures 6]

You make a long video I make a long review

All the jokes made sense and they all put up a so well like the "I wanna f**k the princess" joke. Some was too, obvious, like the 300 joke, people use it WAY too much, its like the usage of Linkn' Park in a music video. I always thought Zelda was strange for knowing strong magic, but never using them, thanks for putting that in. Its nice that Vaati has a little accent. The Riot was one of the funniest part.

Love the knights who play Wii (its so Monty Python theme) and the Hide n' Sheik (The name sounds like a Super Smash Bros. Melee event match) was well drawn. I thought Red "believe in a thing called love" (which is an addicting song).

The main problem is the frequently used jokes gets boring and some scripts are a little too obvious (like Zelda not going to tell Vaati anything while threatened with Octoroks).

I love your series. its funny throughout the way from Michael Jackson voice first video to completely different turn of videos afterward.

[Yoki's Story]

It was nice

I had problems on the dialogue. I kept missing it, or it was too fast. Find a way to make the dialogue viewer's friendly. I suggest you to have some people view the speed or stop the movie and have a button. make sure it's visible, but doesn't cause a distraction. Great story, the beginning was like a Rudolf the Red Nose Reindeer or the ugly duckling, but when it gets to the main story. . . BAM! You changed the concept and used the beginning as a resource for the conflict of the story. Awesome job at the story. Also your fight scene was a little laggy, but it's not a huge problem. I just turn the quality to medium.

All together, nice job with it, It was worth the 16 minutes.